In your opinion is this good? (super short)?

That was great! Amazing! Love it! lol It actually makes me wonder what happens next:D I would definetly rate it 5 stars! (wish i knew the alt code for stars!) the only thing that kinda got me was that it all sounded very sophisticated up until "Is it becase my parents warn me to" but i dont know how you can fix that, so its all good!